Adding Detail

WAIT:Adding Detail To Sentences

A complex sentence has more than one clause. It has added detail giving the reader more information. It adds interest and makes writing JUICY.

You can add to the

beginning

middle

end

of simple sentences.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

I was really happy Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course at camp Bentzion

Mr Jacobsen was really a good coach that helped us though the confidence course.

As we went down to the water I was nervous about sailing at camp.

I was nervous with fear and thought about sailing at camp

I was nervous about sailing at camp when we got there.

After looking up at the terrifying wall We went abseiling

We went abseiling above camp Bentzion.

Adding Detail to the End of Sentences

WALT - Adding Detail to the End of Sentences

My hungry tummy is rumbling and saying “feed me now . 
  

Auntie Akiko who works in Melbourne in a sushi bar called Bruce Lee ‘s sushi. 

The year 5 and 6 children have their own netbooks  and we use them to do our work and also help us learn     

Adding detail to the middle of Sentences

WALT: Adding detail to the middle of sentences   

Children at Pt England School had to stay Inside the classrooms at lunchtime on Friday.  

My hungry tummy is saying I’m rumbling I’m hungry feed me I’m  rumbling .     

           

My aunty Akiki who lives  in Melbourne, works in the sushi bar.      

All the year 5 and 6 from Pt England School  student have their own netbook .     

Adding detail to the Beginning of sentences

WALT :Adding detail to the beginning of the sentences

Pt England School  in Glen Innes,  is so lucky,  because all  the year 5 and 6 children have their own netbook.