Define Adolescence

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I'm Sorry

Mostly every Sundays when church finished we go to my uncles.On Sunday when my cousins and I were hanging out I went to go and stubble up until I heard my little brother in tears.

I turned and he was sitting on the ground so I asked ”What happened”. He went silent. He stopped crying he and gave me a upset which made me wonder?What had I done?.

So I ask him that question but all he did was look at me with anger in his eyes. I got really nervous because I thought I might have hit him in the face by accident because I saw that his face was all red.

I got really nervous and I felt really hot so I asked him if I did hit him and he said yes so I picked him up and said “I’m sorry for hitting you it was an accident". He looked at me with a smile on his face without crying or anger in his eyes.Then my Auntie called and said "It's Ice-cream time. My little brother and I ran and we were the first in line so we got our ice cream and sat outside and started to play on my dads phone.

My Mini Man

Everyone meet my mini man i go to him when we have nothing to do and me and my sisters always fight over him haha its kind of funny at the same time you know but sometimes we have to just leave him where he is.

My Sisters Prom

Seeing my sister going to prom was like seeing her leaving school to go work and find a house but i was so happy that she went see looked so pretty and here are some photos of her and her friends at prom (=

R.I.P NANA

When it was my nanas birthday and everyone left she got really sick she was coughing alot and couldn't talk that much but then one day went passed and my unity kept txting my dad and saying "IF YOU WANT TO SEE MUM AGAIN COME NOW".But we didn't here anything because my dads phone was on silent so when my dad checked his phone he saw that my unity txted ten times so we hurried to my nanas but it was to late so i want to say i big R.I.P NANA I WILL MISS YOU WITH ALL MY HEART (= GOD BLESS.

Wait for me nana at heaven meet you there love you and god bless (=

Family Photos

MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HERE ARE SOME PHOTO OF MY FAMILY (= AND HAPPY NEW YEAR.

MY SISTER

MY SISTER

 ME

MY LITTLE BROTHER

MY MUM

MY BROTHER

MY DAD

Merry Christmas Everyone

I would like to say Merry Christmas to everyone and i very happy new year.I hope you have a great Christmas with your family and friends and may god have a great birthday and that he blesses us all.

MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE AND I HAPPY NEW YEAR

Early Christmas Shopping

Today me and my family went early Christmas Shopping it was so cool.The first shop we went to was the warehouse to buy my little bother some clothes and shoes then we went to factery to buy my sister some swag pants.Then we went to number one shoes to look for some shoes next we went to rebel sports to buy my sister some stuff then we went back to the warehouse to buy me and my some stuff and at the end of the day we went KFC and that was the end of my wonderful day.PS THERE IS NO PHOTOS OF MY PRESENT SOWWIE

These are the shoes we bought 

my little brother.

And these wedges sneakers are the shoes we bought my sister .

And these are the shoes that my sister bought 

Adding Detail

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A complex sentence has more than one clause. It has added detail giving the reader more information. It adds interest and makes writing JUICY.

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Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

I was really happy Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course at camp Bentzion

Mr Jacobsen was really a good coach that helped us though the confidence course.

As we went down to the water I was nervous about sailing at camp.

I was nervous with fear and thought about sailing at camp

I was nervous about sailing at camp when we got there.

After looking up at the terrifying wall We went abseiling

We went abseiling above camp Bentzion.

Strange Noise

On a sunny day it was spring the grass was waving and the birds were singing but also there lived a family of five who owned a very very big farm they had lots of animals some of them were fat and some were skinny there were so much animals that they were going to leave soon but one day it was time to take some animals away from their mothers and them.

The family was so depressed that their son Joe ask where are they going to go but no one answer because they knew if they told him he will be sad and cry all day and night so he asked again and again until he heard something. He turned around and it stopped Joe was scared That he ran outside and again it came back “Joe help us we have been taken help Joe help” Joe did not know what it was so he turned around a Bam no one was there.

“Huh who is it please tell me I will help just show yourself” but no one showed so he closed his eye and again he heard something”Help Joe we are stuck in a freezing room” Joe opened his eyes and he thought hmm what is a freezing room?.So he went to his mom and said “mom what is a freezing room” but his mother didn’t say anything so he walked outside and closed his eyes again there it was again saying”Joe if u dont come we are going to die”.

Then Joe went lost he didn’t know what to do so he thought so hard that he needed a rest so he lade on his bed and started to think hmm what if .

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On A sunny day there lived A boy named James and his brother named Jack. They were out feeding the animals until they were finish,so they sat down on A bale of hay and started to think what they can do today.

But suddenly they heard A nose so they rushed outside and it was there dad Mac he was on his quad biker to see if the animals were ok so James and Jack had and idea so they ran to there dad and said “dad can we use your quad bike please” and they were so lucky that there dad was kind and lends them his quad biker.

So they both hopped on and off they went to find a nice place to race but as they were going they found just the right spot it was called Beverly Hills then Jack said to James “I wonder why its called Beverly Hills?

As they were thinking James didn’t want to think any longer so he told his brother that he is going to beat him at the race so he hopped on and off he went he was pretty good that his brother stopped thinking and told him that he was showing off.

As James was riding he went far and far until Jake heard a crash so he ran to where he heard it and there he saw James,James was crying and telling him to go home and  tell their mom and dad so Jake ran as fast as he could and once again he made it home first he went straight to the phone and called 111 then he told his mom and dad to go to Beverly Hills.

As they got there the ambulance were already taking him inside the car and off they went to the hospital it didn’t take that long until the doctor came out and said “it was a close call”.Two months later he was back to normal and he also learned from his mistake

                             THE END BYE ANISHA

Survival Trip

It was a beautiful long day and the sun was shining the animals were eating and the farmers were planting. But there also lived a sow and her two baby twins they were called Holly and Molly.

But one day there mother said to Holly and Molly “Come on girls lets go for a walk” so the girls rushed outside and off they went.As they were walking the girls got tired so they went back to their pen and went to sleep.

But suddenly the twins woke up because they heard water coming out from somewhere so they woke up there mother and they walked outside and BOOM the water had hit them and separated them from each other.

But as they were getting separated Molly could see all the animals floating in the water trying to get hold of something as she was floating she heard her sister Holly saying”HELP HELP SOMEONE HELP” so she followed the nose and there she saw Holly and her mom standing on something metal.

So Molly hopped on and went up to her sister and mom hugged them so hard that it felt like there hands were going to fall but then they heard a stomach rumbling again and again so Molly said”ohh sorry im just so hungry i can’t help it”

But then they heard a dog barking so they moved a little bit closer to the water and there they were it was a farmer and his dog on a boat they were so happy that Molly and Holly said “YEAH WE ARE FREE” so they hopped on the boat and they went safely back to dry land and they lived happly ever after.

Being a Dairy Farmer

Emma's Big Day

On a sunny day the grass was waving and a mob of sheep bwere eating. One ewe named Emma,  loved eating grass and was busy grazing the fresh spring shoots. Her wooly fleece had been growing all year also she wondered what else will happen today in this lovely morning?

But suddenly Emma heard a familiar nose so she looked back and there they were a farmer on a four wheeler with two sheep dogs. ”Ohh no dogs are coming” said Emma. So Emma and her mob of sheep started to run but they were too late.The dogs were already surrounding them.      

When the dogs were surrounding Emma and her mob, the dogs started to laugh and said “This is going to be fun” but Emma and her mob huddled together until the dogs started to bark so the mob of sheep RAN and RAN until they were inside a pen house.

When they were standing outside Emma and her mob got scared they were all saying stuff at the same time like “What’s going on?” “Are we going to die?” “I’m too young to die”we are all going to die?” But suddenly Emma said ”Please everyone calm down I know we are scared but it’s ok” .

Then after Emma was talking everyone calmed down but as they were getting settled outside the penthouse a shepherd came and got Emma and some of her mob. They were really scared but when they got inside it was full of other sheep and that made Emma think hmm? what is going to happen to us?but as they were walking they could see what was going to happen to them.

It didn’t look that scary until it was Emma’s turn. So the shepherd grabbed Emma and pulled her onto her back and started to shave her. When he was shearing Emma, Emma got really scared and kicked him a lot

she was so frightened by what he was doing. She kicked more and more until she was done. All her wool was gone and she was relief that she was back outside with her mob and by the end of the day they were done.

                           The End By Anisha Mokeni

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Rousie

This is a short Presention about farming and shearing and about sheep.

The Boy Who Cried Wolf

                       
This is a presentation about a book me and my class had read which was called
The Boy Who Cried Wolf and I hope you like my presention.PS pleases leave
a nice comment thank you.

Cross Country Run

Sitting next to my friend and the eleven year olds get called out I got scared. I felt butterflies in my stomach that I told my friend “Are you scared because i am”.Then mr burts tells us to get into three lines so we did.Then we had to stand on the start line which made me get more butterflies and made start shaking but when we started running i felt happy because i was running with my friend.

When I was running it was fun because I was running with my friend Ramondel.While we were running she was making me laugh so much that I got tired it was pretty funny at first but when it got longer and longer it felt like my legs were going to fall off and i could’t laugh  anymore because i was so so tired and i need water.When I finished my first lap I found out that we had to do two and  even though I was tired and coming last I still knew that i needed to finish no matter what happens.

Then when i looked at the front of me i saw the finish line and i though it was close but when me and my friend kept on running it seemed like it was far and it was.But me and my friend kept on running even though it was far we kept on running and the finish line got closer and closer and finally we made it to the end i was so happy that we made it and from there that was the end of my run.

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Rhyming Couplet

A couplet is a two line peom.The last word of each line rhyming. 

I saw a little ping pong ball.

That was very very small .

I went to the library to look.

for a nice good little story book.

Only one day is fathers day which means its my dads day .

and the only thing i can do is to make him glad all the way throw.

My Reading Interview

Anisha Reading Interview from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.